Personality profile comparison

Which lead does a better job of drawing the reader into the story?
Classmate Profile #2.
What is the angle/focus of each story?
The first profile focuses on Codi Mills passion for books and photography.
The second profile focused on Esposito's interests in music rather than baseball.
Which story did you like better and why?
I enjoyed the second story more because it was easier to realte to.

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